Letter

Band 9: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to the principal of the college in which you got accepted and say that you cannot start your course. In your letter: - Which course had you applied for - Why you cannot start - Ask about the future courses availability Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing regarding my admission to your college and I would like to inform you that I cannot start my course at this time.

I was recently accepted into the Pre-Engineering course. I am really excited to join this course at your college. Unfortunately, I cannot join the course now due to some family issues and my mother’s poor health. She isn’t well. It’s essential for me to stay at home with her. She is very important to me. Because of this, I will not be able to give my full attention to my studies.

I hope to join the same course at your college in the future. Could you please let me know whether it will be available in the next intake.Thank you for your understanding of my situation. I look forward to your prompt response regarding the availability of future courses.

Yours faithfully,

Safia.

Word Count: 157

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B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

college: 3

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Task Response

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. The candidate clearly identifies the course, provides a valid and well-explained reason for not being able to attend, and asks about future availability. The tone is appropriately formal and respectful for a letter to a college principal. No improvements are necessary as the requirements are satisfied comprehensively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is very well-organized. The progression of ideas is logical, moving from the purpose of the letter to the explanation and finally to the inquiry about future options. Paragraphing is used effectively to separate different points, making the message easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, clear, and accurate for the context. To reach a higher band, you could incorporate more sophisticated or formal academic vocabulary. For example, instead of saying 'She isn't well' or 'She is very important to me,' you could use phrases like 'due to her deteriorating health' or 'as my presence is required to support her recovery.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is excellent. You have used a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, with high accuracy. There are no noticeable errors that impede communication. Ensure that you maintain this level of precision in punctuation, particularly with question marks at the end of inquiries.

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