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Band 5+: You have recently taken up a new hobby that you are really excited about and want to share this with your best friend. Write a letter to your friend explaining your new hobby. You should include details about: - what the hobby is and why you decided to try it - how often you practice and what you enjoy about it - whether you would like your friend to join you in this hobby or try it out together.

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Hi Sude I am zehra your closs friend ,did you miss me becouse I miss you so much.

I am writieng you becouse I am geting a new hobby , OMG I am so exiciting to tell you everythink .

I was in a holiday as you now , I met a group wich is all musichions . And we spend a great time with it and than they learnt I played piano when I was todler .

As you now I always want a become a pianist one thay and my parents have had never like the idea . I told them all my stories begining to and , and than they told me to they can teach me how to play piano as I wanted and I say yes soo I have a hobby now but I wish you can be hear with me too I miss you so much by

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by mentioning the new hobby, reasons for taking it up, frequency of practice, and enjoyment. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed explanation of each aspect.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's coherence is somewhat affected by grammatical errors and informal language. Improving sentence structure and grammar would enhance the flow and clarity of the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is simple and lacks range. Using more descriptive and precise language would enrich the letter and demonstrate a wider vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and overall understanding. Focusing on grammatical accuracy is crucial for improving the score.

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