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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement for a part-time receptionist position at a dental clinic. The job requires excellent communication and organizational skills. Write a letter to the clinic manager applying for the position. In your letter: mention why you want this job; highlight your communication and organizational abilities; indicate when you can start working.

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good morning

I am marceting student. I saw your adventisement about part-time receptionist at your local dental clinic. i saw this adventisement on internet when i watched a film. This work is perfect for me because will be good chance for me because i am student and i canwork oly afternoon. i will be good in this role beacuse i have wonderfull expierience professional and i am very polite and hard-working person . i can so many things. I can talk with others people very well. In my opinion i am perfect person on this position. I am going to work only afternoon but i can work every day. if you apply me on this position i can start work toomorow at 6pm. I hope that my advantages on this position are enough. Thank you so much for proposition and see you soon.

warm regards

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but has significant issues. It mentions the position and where the advertisement was seen, but the details are vague and somewhat irrelevant (e.g., 'when I watched a film'). The reasons for being a good fit are general and lack specific examples of customer service or administrative skills. Availability is mentioned but is unclear ('only afternoon' and 'every day' are contradictory). The tone is informal and contains numerous grammatical and spelling errors that affect clarity. To improve, provide specific examples of relevant skills, clarify availability, and use a more formal and structured format. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a basic structure with an opening, body, and closing, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and informal phrasing. The ideas are presented in a somewhat random order, and the lack of clear paragraphing makes it harder to follow. To improve, organize the letter into clear paragraphs: one for the introduction and purpose, one for your skills and fit, and one for availability and closing. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Firstly', 'In addition', 'Regarding my availability') to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'adventisement', 'expierience', 'toomorow') and informal choices (e.g., 'I can so many things', 'perfect person'). To improve, use a wider range of professional vocabulary related to customer service and administration (e.g., 'handling inquiries', 'managing appointments', 'providing excellent customer service'). Also, proofread to correct spelling and choose more precise words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout, including subject-verb agreement ('I are'), incorrect verb forms ('will be good chance'), missing articles ('I am marketing student'), and punctuation issues (missing capital letters, run-on sentences). The range of sentence structures is limited. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses, articles, and capitalization. Proofreading carefully before submitting is essential.

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