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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

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Dear Mr./Mrs. Smith,

I am writing this letter to show my interest in teaching your children, the Hindi language as it is my native language.

I can be a great fit for this opportunity as I am speaking this language from almost 2 decades. Also, I have a good command in both verbal and written perspective of the following.

Addition to teaching hindi to your kids, I can provide my help in teaching them maths also if you wish,as I have a great background in maths itself.

This will be a great opportunity for me to provide myself with some extra income , as I am falling short in my finances because of the inflation.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Your faithfully,

Harshil Dhola.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

teaching: 3

great: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by explaining why the writer is suitable for the job, mentioning additional help they can provide, and giving reasons for wanting the job. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the requirements outlined in the task. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor issues with transitions between sentences and ideas. Consider using linking words to improve the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

There is a reasonable range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases could be more precise and sophisticated. Try to incorporate more varied vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors and inconsistencies in punctuation. Review the use of articles, verb tenses, and punctuation for improvement.

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