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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year." Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …….,

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter as response to the advertisement that to teach my language to your children.

I am Joyal joseph, an English teacher in St Mary’s school near to your home. As I am an English teacher I can easily communicate to your children moreover I can teach them Malayalam within one year.

Furthermore, anyone interested in learning Malayalam from your family I can help them. Apart from that, I am expert in computer and I will be available in that area.

I am happy to do this job because it will support me in my financial crisis. Along that, I am living in the same street where you are living, so that I can take the classes any time on the weekends.

I would appreciate if you would accept my request as a Malayalam teacher to your children.

Yours faithfully

Joyal joseph

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

teacher: 3

malayalam: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three bullet points of the task, explaining suitability, additional skills, and reasons for wanting the job. However, the response could be improved by providing more specific examples and details to strengthen the arguments. For instance, elaborating on teaching experience or providing specific computer skills would enhance the letter. Also, the tone could be more professional and less focused on personal financial issues. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing each bullet point from the task, and a concise conclusion. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, referencing) would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more precise and varied language to express your ideas. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'I can,' explore alternative phrases to showcase your abilities and suitability for the role.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that sometimes impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing writing can help enhance accuracy.

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