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Band 9: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Anhelina, and I am writing to apply for the holiday job at the City Museum shop. I saw your advertisement in the newspaper and would love the chance to work with you.

I have experience working in a bookstore for six months, where I helped customers find what they needed, managed the cash register, and organized shelves. I am friendly, hardworking, and good at communicating with people. I also have strong English skills, which will help me assist visitors from different backgrounds.

I am very interested in this job because I enjoy history and museums. It would be exciting to work in a place where I can learn more about history while helping customers. I believe my skills and enthusiasm make me a good fit for this position.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Anhelina Zakharenko

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