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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Hiring Manage,

I am writing to this letter with regard to one of your advertisements for the vacancy of sales representative during the holiday season.

I am priya Pradhan Shrestha, forty years old from Pokhara, I worked a marketing manager in the Goldstar Shoes. I am hardworking person and I have excellent experience in customer service. It was difficult to communication with my college I shifted here. During my tenure there I have excelled in my sales target and also majority of the customers rated 5 stars for the services.

Furthermore, I have elected marketing as a my specialization so I am interested in acquiring more skills and experience which would help me apply for my long term job.

I look forward to hearing your positive feedback.

Your faithfully

Priya Shrestha

Word Count: 132

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the candidate, mentioning experience and skills, and expressing interest in the job. However, it could benefit from a more detailed explanation of relevant experience and skills. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack clarity and logical connections, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies are present, affecting the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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