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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to you to apply for a job that you advertise in an english newspaper. Allow me to elaborate about myself and why I think I’ll be the perfect fit for it.

My name is Manpreet Kaur. I’m a graduate from London art School. I had an experience of working as a frontman at London Art Gallery. Additionally, I’m also certified as tourist guide. Because of this experience, my knowledge about the ancient things is vast. I enjoy socializing with others, therefore, my social skills are excellent for this job.

I would be grateful if I could be considered for this position . My employer is happy to supply a reference and I am available for interview at any time .

Please do not hesitate to contact me should you have any questions.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Manpreet Kaur

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

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