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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for a job in City Museum shop during my holidays, I have seen an advertisement in English Newspaper.

Firstly, my name is Asif Ali, I am a student of South Bank University in London city, I am 24 year old and my subject is history. In addition, I am married and I have two kids.

Furthermore, there are some other factors that need to be considered such as I have 3 month work experience in London museum during my last vacation holidays, I am passionate about historical things and I have knowledge about history as a history student.

Given the circumstances, I would greatly apperiate your intervention in this matter. Additionally, I am interested in this job because this job is related to my subject and I am keen to get this job and I have some experiences as well.

Your understanding and cooperation in this matter would be invaluable.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely,

Asif Ali

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