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Band 4+: You heard about a community center that is looking for volunteers to help organize events for children. Write a letter to the community center director applying for the volunteer position. You should include details about: - which events you are interested in helping with - why you want to volunteer and what skills you bring - your availability for volunteering.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are doing well, I just wanted to let you know i am writing this letter because i heard information about your community that is looking for volunteers to help organize events for children.

Honestly, I interested with the vacancy as volunteer and i have so much experiences in this subject. In 2020 I went to Tanjung Lesung as volunteer for help children and elder people in the Tsunami area. In 2023 I also work as baby sitter for several family in Jakarta until early 2024.

In addition, I have so many skill for organize event because my parent occupation is event organizer. I am interesting with your program because it will be new experiences for me and new environment aswell.

Hopefully, you could accept me as volunteer as soon as possible, it is be a honour and I will apreciate that. and I can’t wait to join and meet new friend.

Sincerely,

Syakira Nakagawa

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task. It clearly states the applicant's interest in the volunteer position, mentions relevant experience, explains the motivation for volunteering, and outlines availability implicitly through past experience and eagerness to start. The tone is appropriate for the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, some sentences could be better connected, and the paragraphing could be more distinct to improve the overall flow and organization of ideas.

Lexical Resource

A range of vocabulary is used, and attempts are made to use more sophisticated language. While generally appropriate, there are some instances where word choice could be more precise or natural-sounding.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter attempts to use a variety of sentence structures. However, there are a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that sometimes impede clarity and affect the overall accuracy. Focusing on sentence construction and punctuation would be beneficial.

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