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Band 4+: You organised a party for the 90th birthday of a relative in a hotel. Many elderly guests attended the party and it was a huge success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, ● give the details of the party ● give the reason why the party was so successful ● mention the things that helped with special mention to specific hotel staff You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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I am Harri. I was glad that we finalized your venue for my grand father’s 90th birthday which happened a week ago on April 8th.

I could not stop myself from appreciating your team who were so warm and welcoming from the time we arrived till the closure. The comfortable seats and impeccable service exceeded my expectations. I was particularly impressed by the way your supervisor operated his team members to make everyone feel their home. Special mention to the members who were handling people with a huge smile despite the over populated atmosphere.

Honestly we were not expecting these amount of people but the way your chef handled it without creating chaos deserves a special mention. With these type of service you completely deserve a 5 star rating from us and we will surely recommend your hotel to our friends and colleague.

In the end, looking forward to organizing such other events with you.

Yours faithfully,

Harri

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by thanking the hotel manager for hosting the 90th birthday party. However, more details about the party itself, the reason for its success, and specific mention of the hotel staff are needed to fully meet the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. It would benefit from better organization and smoother transitions between points.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases could be improved for a more formal tone. Additionally, more sophisticated vocabulary and expressions could enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, such as missing articles, incorrect verb tenses, and punctuation mistakes. Proofreading for these errors is essential to improve grammatical accuracy.

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