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Band 5+: You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · tell him/her which team won · describe the weather conditions that day · say how you felt about the match

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Dear Juan,

I was wishing playing the game with you and the Team this weekened, but unfortunately the accident happens. I hope you are felling better, all the team miss you. We have a good news, and I writing to tell you which team won the first cup.

Our team won first place, it was a pleasure to be part of the game, all the team was celebrated when we finish the game. Also, the parents of families created a meeting and we went to a retaurant for the first place in the year, it was an amazing experience.

Everybody play completly good, we got a positive strategy from the instructor. At the first time, we were tied and the intructor thought we weren’t going to win the first trophy because the Blue team beanned at the leader so they took him out of the game and the team was totally discouraged and dissatisfied with that desicion. Elvis took the command and they help us how to play the game correctly, with that strategy we won the game.

I was extremely excited for the game and got a little nervous becuase the opponent have more advantages and have an excelent team players. I hope I can see you again when you are completely recover.

Thanks,

MARIA

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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first: 5

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements by informing Juan about the team's victory, describing the match conditions, and expressing your feelings about the game. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language, and ensure consistent verb tense usage throughout the letter. Also, consider adding more specific details to make the descriptions more vivid and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is adequate, but consider using shorter paragraphs to make the letter more readable. Focus on linking sentences more smoothly to enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more varied and precise language. Try to incorporate synonyms and more descriptive words to make the letter more engaging. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'good' or 'amazing,' explore alternatives that convey your feelings more accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Review basic grammar rules and practice applying them in your writing to enhance accuracy.

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