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Band 7+: You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · tell him/her which team won · describe the weather conditions that day · say how you felt about the match

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Dear Ruchin,

I hope you and your family are doing well. It was an unfortunate that you were not able to play a football with us for our final match due to an accident.

Firstly, I would like to provide you with some good news that our team won the match and it was a proud moment for our college. Also, we all missed you a lot during the celebration time.

Moreover, the match was very tough to win, as both teams were playing well and doing their best to win the title. You are the best player in our team; therefore, we all felt your absence and your playing skills during the final match.

Lastly, I hope you are feeling well and have a good recovery, as everyone in the team is excited to meet you and cheer you up. Please let me know if you need anything. We are praying for your good health.

Waiting for your comeback.

See you soon.

Warm regards,

Dhruvi Patel

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

match: 3

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Task Response

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-organized, clearly written, and uses appropriate language and tone for a friendly letter. There are no omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the progression of ideas is clear. However, transitions between some ideas could be smoother to enhance the overall flow. For example, elaborating slightly more on the transition from the match details to inquiring about Ruchin's health would improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally effective. Phrases like 'proud moment for our college' and 'felt your absence' are well-chosen. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied and specific vocabulary related to sports and feelings, such as describing the specific challenges faced during the match or expressing the team's emotions in more detail. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. Sentences are generally well-constructed. Pay attention to articles (e.g., 'a football') and ensure correct usage. Also, vary sentence structures to enhance the overall grammatical range. For example, combining some shorter sentences or using more complex sentence structures could add sophistication.

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