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Band 6+: You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · tell him/her which team won · describe the weather conditions that day · say how you felt about the match

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Dear Ruchin,

I hope you are doing well and also recovered from a leg injury.

I am writing this letter to provide you with information about the football match of our college team.

Fortunately, our team ‘Rising Star’ won the match with four points. In addition, I was the man of the match for that day due to my goals and goal keeping techniques.

Moreover, in the middle of the match, the condition was very tense because of the opponent team. However, our team played very well and converted that situation into fortune by showing team spirit and management.

Lastly, I am feeling joyful for this win but, we also missed you during the game because of your skill of managing each and every player. Also, it is proud moment for our college as it is our first tournament win in last few years.

I hope this news will make you happy and I wish you a speedy recovery.

See you soon.

Warm regards,

Dhruvi Patel

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

match: 4

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing relevant and sufficient information about the match, the conditions, and your feelings. The tone is friendly and supportive. To further improve, consider adding more specific details to enhance the description of the conditions and your feelings, making the letter even more engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. However, some transitions could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, the shift from describing the win to discussing the tense moments in the match could be better connected. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task. Phrases like 'man of the match' and 'team spirit' are well-used. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and descriptive language related to the match and your feelings. For instance, instead of just saying 'the condition was very tense,' elaborate on what made it tense.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, though there are some areas where accuracy could be improved. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and sentence structure. For example, in the second paragraph, ensure that the tenses align correctly when describing past events. Reviewing and correcting these minor errors will enhance the overall clarity and impact of your writing.

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