Band 4+: You received this message from the company manager. Dear employee, From next week, staff members may work remotely two days per week. Employees who choose remote work must attend online meetings regularly, complete weekly progress reports, and remain available during office hours. Please tell us whether you are interested in remote working and any support you may need. Kind regards, Company Manager Write a letter to the manager. Write about your opinion of the change and how you feel about it.

The letter addresses the task by expressing your opinion on the remote work change and mentioning both positive and negative feelings. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, you refer to 'working a day online per week' instead of the stated two days, and you do not clearly state whether you are interested in remote work or specify any support you may need, as requested in the task. To improve, ensure you fully cover all parts of the prompt: clearly state your interest (or lack thereof) in remote work, mention any support you require, and accurately reflect the details given (e.g., two days per week). Also, avoid irrelevant or inaccurate statements, such as 'I may not participate' in meetings, which contradicts the requirement to attend them. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter has a basic structure with clear paragraphs for each point, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The message can be followed, but not effortlessly. Cohesive devices are limited and sometimes misused (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondly', 'Finally'). Paragraphing is attempted but could be more skillfully managed to improve logical progression.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and sophistication. Some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'online meeting', 'colleagues') and there are errors in word choice (e.g., 'response of' instead of 'in response to', 'negative sides' instead of 'negative aspects'). The letter would benefit from more varied and precise vocabulary to express opinions and suggestions more naturally.

There are frequent grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as incorrect verb forms ('should I to work'), missing subjects ('company need'), and awkward sentence structures ('I disliked organizing online meeting always'). Punctuation is mostly correct but could be improved. The range of structures is limited, and control is inconsistent. Focusing on basic sentence construction and verb tenses would significantly improve accuracy.