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Band 4+: You received this message from the company manager. Dear employee, From next week, staff members may work remotely two days per week. Employees who choose remote work must attend online meetings regularly, complete weekly progress reports, and remain available during office hours. Please tell us whether you are interested in remote working and any support you may need. Kind regards, Company Manager Write a letter to the manager. Write about your opinion of the change and how you feel about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I appreciate for your email and asking my opinions and advice. I am writing to about Remote working is very important for long distance workers.

Firstly, i had so satisfied with your email, when i read it. I think this is significant for family workers and single mom or live far from the company. If i say, online meetings create more comfort for staffs.

Secondly, if i had a chance, i prefer to go to work office. This is because i live near our Company. I absolutely agree with your decision about Employees who choose remote work must attend weekly progress reports, and remain available during office hours.

I hope you will understand your faithfully my opinions

Musayeva Sofiyaxon

Word Count: 123

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by expressing an opinion on the remote work change and mentioning personal feelings. However, there are some inaccuracies and irrelevant details, such as focusing on 'long distance workers' and 'single mom' which are not directly requested. The response also includes grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that detract from clarity. To improve, ensure all content directly responds to the manager's request for your opinion and support needs, avoid irrelevant examples, and proofread for grammar and word choice. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a basic structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear connections between ideas. For example, the transition from discussing the benefits of remote work to stating a personal preference for office work is abrupt. To improve, use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. The paragraphing could be more skillfully managed by grouping related points together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'staffs' should be 'staff', 'long distance workers' is unclear). There is an attempt to use formal language (e.g., 'I appreciate for your email'), but it is not always accurate. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary by using synonyms (e.g., 'beneficial' instead of 'important') and more precise terms (e.g., 'commuters' instead of 'long distance workers'). Avoid informal phrases like 'i had so satisfied' and use standard expressions like 'I was very satisfied'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms ('i had so satisfied' should be 'I was very satisfied'), missing prepositions ('I appreciate for your email' should be 'I appreciate your email'), and subject-verb agreement issues ('Employees who choose... must attend' is correct, but other parts are flawed). Punctuation is inconsistent (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and prepositions. Proofreading for errors before submission would also help.

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