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Band 4+: You received this message from the company manager. Dear employee, From next week, staff members may work remotely two days per week. Employees who choose remote work must attend online meetings regularly, complete weekly progress reports, and remain available during office hours. Please tell us whether you are interested in remote working and any support you may need. Kind regards, Company Manager Write a letter to the manager. Write about your opinion of the change and how you feel about it.

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Dear manager ,

Thank you very much for you recent email regarding staff members work . I am writing this reply to adress the points you mentioned and to provide the necessary information

Firstly , I felt very excited because it needs for some workers . It gives us convinient and more time . For instance , I have not more money for go to office or other costs .

Secondly , I am certainly interested in working remotely . I agree with all the conditions , including attending online meetings , I will do complete weekly progress reports and remain available during office hours .

Thank you for providing us with this opportunity .

Kind regards,

Gʻanijonov Muhammadsodiq.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by expressing interest in remote work and acknowledging the conditions. The writer's opinion and feelings about the change are clearly stated. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses, such as not mentioning any specific support needed (as requested in the task) and a few grammatical errors (e.g., 'you recent email', 'adress', 'convinient'). To improve, ensure all task requirements are fully covered, including any support requests, and proofread for grammar and spelling. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a closing. However, the flow is somewhat disrupted by awkward phrasing and missing transitions. For example, the shift from expressing excitement to mentioning financial constraints feels abrupt. To improve, use linking words like 'furthermore' or 'in addition' to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and contains several errors, such as 'adress' (address), 'convinient' (convenient), and 'for go to office' (to go to the office). There is limited range and some inappropriate word choices. To improve, expand your vocabulary by learning common phrases for formal letters, such as 'I am writing to express my views' or 'I would appreciate support with...'. Also, proofread for spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are multiple grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('it needs for some workers' should be 'it is needed for some workers'), missing articles ('the necessary information'), and incorrect prepositions ('for go to office' should be 'to go to the office'). Sentence structures are mostly simple. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences, and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and prepositions.

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