Band 4+: You received this message from the company manager. Dear employee, From next week, staff members may work remotely two days per week. Employees who choose remote work must attend online meetings regularly, complete weekly progress reports, and remain available during office hours. Please tell us whether you are interested in remote working and any support you may need. Kind regards, Company Manager Write a letter to the manager. Write about your opinion of the change and how you feel about it.

The letter addresses the task by expressing an opinion on remote work and mentioning some feelings about the change. However, there are several issues that detract from task achievement. The response includes irrelevant details (e.g., discussing friends wanting to work, suggesting the work is easy) and inaccurate information (e.g., 'big monthly' is unclear). Key points from the task, such as discussing support needed or responding to the manager's specific questions, are not fully covered. The letter also lacks a clear structure and contains language errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on directly answering the manager's questions: state your interest in remote work, explain your opinion clearly, and specify any support you might need (e.g., equipment, training). Avoid introducing unrelated topics like friends' opinions or general comments about young people. Keep the response concise and relevant to the task.

The letter attempts to address the task but lacks clear organization and logical flow. Ideas are presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the message. Paragraphing is not effectively used, and transitions between points are abrupt. To improve, consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs for each main point (e.g., your opinion, support needed, and suggestions), and a conclusion. Use linking words like 'firstly,' 'however,' and 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary used is limited and often inappropriate or inaccurate (e.g., 'big monthly,' 'extract money,' 'youngers'). There are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'abaut,' 'apportunity,' 'Sincerly') and awkward phrasing that hinders clarity. To improve, expand your vocabulary by learning common business letter phrases (e.g., 'I am writing to express my views,' 'I would appreciate support with...') and practice using words accurately. Focus on correct spelling and word choice to convey your ideas more naturally. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'Due to it give men relax'), subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'I work the remote work too'), and missing or incorrect prepositions (e.g., 'afrer the remote work'). Punctuation is often missing or misused. To improve, review basic grammar rules such as tense usage, sentence structure, and punctuation. Practice writing simple, clear sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures. Proofreading your work can help catch errors.