Band 6+: You recently attended a seminar on professional development organized by your company. While you found the seminar beneficial, you have a few suggestions on how it could be improved. Write an email to the seminar organizer to provide your feedback. Instructions: Start your email by addressing the seminar organizer. Introduce yourself and mention your participation in the seminar. Explain what you found beneficial about the seminar. Provide specific suggestions for improvement. Close your email politely and offer to discuss your feedback further if needed.

Dear Sir,

Being a regular attendee of the seminars and a Senior sales manager your company, I have some essential suggestions to improve professional development workshops, that I am ought to discuss here.

Firstly, me and my colleagues are delighted to be a part of the session on professional development. It has significantly motivated us to focus on our personality in order to get professionalism and enhance our skills. We agreed to work on valuable skills to enforce working conditions and support our technical knowledge.

My suggestion is to incorporate business management chapter in these workshops, as it is imperative for one’s development and career growth. Professional development indeed requires various tasks to be managed and it is indifferent requirement to learn. It could help to overcome critical challenges in timely manner, and it upholds the confidence.

I would be glad to have more discussion on this topic, and always available to provide any solutions. It is my pleasure to be part of this company and culture.

Thank you,

Darshil