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Band 5+: You recently attended a seminar on the importance of mental health and would like to express your gratitude to the speaker. Write a letter to the speaker thanking them for the seminar. You should include details about: - what you learned from the seminar - how it has impacted your perspective on mental health - a suggestion for a future topic you would like them to cover.

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Dear Ms Tan,

I am writting this letter to extend my gratitude from the seminar that I attended which you were the speaker, It was held two weeks ago at Marina Bay Sands regarding Mental Health.

It was really a good experience and it helps me to understand the basic principles, such as, ways on how to handle stress and how to cope with it. As currently Im having a hard time in my job and I noticed that I am easily agitated and frustrated on small things and my personality in total hits different these days, I was enlightened after I joined the seminar, it gives me the idea about my mental well being.

May I suggest, It would be great if you will be able to tacle information about Mental health illnesses. Nowadays people are setting aside their mental health from either work,family and friends.

Yours Faithfully,

Marshellane Macalling

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing gratitude, mentioning what was learned, and suggesting a future topic. However, it could benefit from a more detailed and structured approach to these points.

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The letter's message is generally understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

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4.5

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3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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