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Band 4+: You recently attended a short course or workshop that greatly benefited you. Write a letter to a friend recommending they take the same course/workshop. You should include details about: - what the course/workshop was about - why you found it so helpful - where and when they can take the course/workshop.

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Dear Anais,

I hope you are doing well, I am writing to tell you about that I recently found close to my house a workshop that it will be interested for you because you enjoy travel and meet different culture in the world, for this reason, this workshop has a particulary beneficial for you.

This workshop is about how to travel around the world saving money as much as you can. It has a lot of recommendations about hotels, transportation, food, turistic places, flights, and among others. I believe is good for you because you love travel and save money as well. Additionally, if you register now you will have 30% of descount.

Furthermore, you should go to the webside and apply inmediatly because is only for today. On the other hand, if you need more information you can call here 4516598911.

Let me know what you think

Hope to see you soon,

Best wishes,

Diana Camacho

Word Count: 157

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
about: 3
workshop: 3
because: 3
travel: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter adequately covers the task requirements by describing the workshop, explaining its usefulness to the friend, and providing registration information. However, the language could be more precise and sophisticated. Consider varying sentence structures and using more descriptive vocabulary to enhance clarity and impact. Also, ensure consistent accuracy in grammar and word choice throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction is a bit roundabout. Try to state the purpose of your letter more directly. Use topic sentences to guide the reader through each paragraph. Transition words could be used more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'travel,' consider synonyms like 'explore,' 'journey,' or 'discover.' Using more specific vocabulary related to travel and workshops would also enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and article usage. For example, 'that I recently found close to my house a workshop that it will be interested for you' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. Focus on constructing clear, grammatically sound sentences. Proofread carefully to catch errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage.

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