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Band 7+: You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to cancel the booking of a course that I chose last week at your college. I registered for a part-time course to prepare for my upcoming IELTS Academic exam in your college. The name of the course is Academic English and the course ID is E1022.

I was planning to give the test next month but due to some recent changes in Australia’s Visa requirements, there is an option to chose either general English test or academic test. Since, I have given the general test few years back, I’m more confident in taking it again. So, I don’t need to take the preparation course.

However, I was looking at the other available courses which I am thinking to switch to. There is another course named Business English which I think can be very helpful to me as I’m planning to taking business administration course in Australia. Please let me know about the process to change the course.

Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Janvi

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

academic: 3

english: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear and concise information about the cancellation and the desired course change.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter flows well, but there are a few minor grammatical errors that slightly disrupt the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

7.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using appropriate and varied language to express the message.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The letter displays a good command of grammar, but there are a few minor errors that could be improved.

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