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Band 5+: You recently borrowed a book from a friend, but you accidentally damaged it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain what happened • say how sorry you are for the damage • tell him/her how you plan to replace or repair the book

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Dear my friend

I am writing this letter in order to ask apologize for my indifference.

If you remember, I borrowed one book which is really valuable for you, named autonomic habits. I got this book from you around a week ago. Afterward, my cousin teared apart suddenly during he was playing her toys. At that time, I was not at home and when I arrived it, I was shocked after seeing it, as I know the importance of this book for you.

The next point is that I want to ask apologize for this occasion and to be honest I felt a sense of guilt, because I could not justify your trust.

Finally, do not be upset my friend, in order to wash away my guilt, I will plan to buy new one, however, new book cannot be as valuable as previous one. I consider it as a feasible solution.

I hope that you forgive me and I am still feeling a sense guilt for my indifference.

Take care,

David Muller

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

guilt: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the situation, expressing remorse, and proposing a solution. The language is generally appropriate, though there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using more natural and precise language and proofreading carefully for errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more explicit topic sentences to introduce each paragraph's main idea. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs, enhancing the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the impact. For example, instead of 'indifference,' consider a word that more accurately reflects the situation, such as 'carelessness' or 'negligence.' Explore synonyms to add variety and sophistication to your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. For example, 'ask apologize' should be 'apologize' or 'offer an apology.' Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize these errors.

Band 5+: You recently borrowed a book from a friend, but you accidentally damaged it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain what happened • say how sorry you are for the damage • tell him/her how you plan to replace or repair the book

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