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Band 6+: you recently bought a piece of equipment from a company on the internet when it is arrived it is damaged write a letter to the manger of the company describe the piece of equipment you bought explain about the damaged piece say what younwant the manger to do

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to formally register a complaint regarding the Dell monitor I ordered from your store last weekend which I discovered to be damaged.

Upon its arrival, the monitor functioned well, but after a few days of use, the screen began to freeze and shut off unexpectedly. This malfunction resulted in the loss of an important presentation I had been working on for over a month.

I kindly request a replacement with a Lenovo monitor, which I believe would better suit my needs. Additionally, I would appreciate it if you could thoroughly inspect the product before shipping it.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours sincerely,

Priyanka

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5.5

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7.5

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6.5

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