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Band 7+: You recently bought a piece of Sports Equipment from an online Store. when you first used to the piece of Sports Equipment you found a problem with it. write a letter to the manager of the online store in your letter, describe the problem with the piece of Sports Equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this message finds you well. I am one of your regular customers and am writing to bring to your attention an issue that I faced recently. I have been using your sports equipment for the past seven years; however, the cricket bat that I had purchased from your website last Sunday, cracked yesterday during cricket practise.

As a result, my right arm has been fractured. Although I have always had good shopping experiences, I injured this time. Moreover, our coach discarted my name from the final match, which has scheduled next Saturday, and my doctor suggested that I should take bed rest for a couple of days for a swift recovery.

I would appreciate it if you could investigate this product’s test certificate with your staff and ensure that this type of issue does not recur in the future. Furthermore, being a reputed games equipment manufacturer, I hope you will provide some compensation for this uncertainty.

I look forward to a positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Subhas Kundu

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Overall Band Score

7

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity could elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. Minor improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

7

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, demonstrating a good range. More precise word choices could improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the letter demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, some errors are present. Improving accuracy would significantly enhance the score.

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