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Band 9: You recently bought a piece of Sports Equipment from an online Store. when you first used to the piece of Sports Equipment you found a problem with it. write a letter to the manager of the online store in your letter, describe the problem with the piece of Sports Equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I recently purchased a new MRF cricket bat from your online store. Unfortunately, after using it only once, the handle of the bat broke completely.

I am a cricketer and the captain of my city team. I have a lot of experience with cricket equipment, and I was excited to try out the MRF bat that I found on your website. However, I was disappointed when it broke so easily.

I have purchased many items from your online shop in the past and have always been satisfied with the quality. However, this time, I was disappointed with the bat’s performance. I hope that you can provide a replacement bat that is of good quality and has sturdy packaging.

Please respond to this letter and arrange for a replacement bat to be sent to me. I hope that the next bat I receive will be in perfect condition.

Sincerely,

Bheem Odedra

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Overall Band Score

9
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9
All parts of the task are successfully addressed. The letter is well-organized and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

9
The letter flows smoothly and logically. The ideas are connected effectively, and the paragraphs are well-structured.

Lexical Resource

8
The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate, demonstrating a good range of words. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used in places to enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9
The grammar is accurate and error-free. A wide range of grammatical structures is used effectively.

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