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Band 5+: You recently bought a piece of Sports Equipment from an online Store. when you first used to the piece of Sports Equipment you found a problem with it. write a letter to the manager of the online store in your letter, describe the problem with the piece of Sports Equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear sir/madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter for I purchase badminton racket equipment from an Amazon. Com website online shop.

Firstly, I opened the box packet of bedmenton racket. I am very excited to play badminton with my friends . So, I forgot check the piece and go for garden with my buddys. I sheard my racket with friends and than my friends start playing badminton. I can see the game and I noticed that racket net is damaged because it’s racket bad plastic has been used to make this net and I wanted a net racket with strings. So, I replaced a racket for exchange. Please you can use the best plastic but the plastic of this racket is very rough plastic and replace me to my racket.

I request you for use nylon, best plastic and make a very fantastic racket.

I hope you understand my problem.

Yours kind regard,

Johan

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
racket: 8
plastic: 5
badminton: 3
friends: 3
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Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the problem and desired resolution.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structures. Improved organization and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5
The vocabulary is adequate but limited. More precise and varied vocabulary would improve the letter's overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5
Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improved grammar and sentence structure are essential.

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