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Band 4+: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course D say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I recently took a short cookery course in your company. I was called by cookery course. I was invited by director of food course. It made me happy. To commence with, cookery course is the crucial part of our life. Firstly, I want to introduce myself. My name is Halil. My surname is Akdogan. I’m 27 years old. I’m a chef and I have been working in a big hotel for 3 years. Secondly, I was called by cookery course. I was invited by course director. It made me happy. Because, they wanted to my feedback about this course. However, In my opinion, I enjoyed during cooking course. Therefore, On the other hand, cookery course are my dream job and course. That’s why I enjoyed during this course. I learnt many thing about my work since the course. Because this course suitable my profetion. That’s why, It is a piece of cake for me. To conclude, I want to give you some advice. For example; after this course, you will start to new course. Because, people love cookery course and cookery course very commen in our country. I hope you will appreciate my advice. I look forward to hearing back from your soon.

Your Sincerely,

Halil Akdogan.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 17

cookery: 7

because: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

4.5

The letter partially addresses the task by describing what the writer enjoyed about the course and suggesting another cookery course. However, there are significant lapses in content, such as irrelevant personal information and repetition. The response could be improved by focusing more on the specific aspects of the course that were enjoyable and providing a clearer suggestion for another course.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The message is somewhat difficult to follow due to the lack of clear organization and coherence. There are several instances of repetition and irrelevant information, which affect the overall cohesion of the letter. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, leading to a lack of clear structure.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is not always accurate or appropriate. The writer demonstrates some control of lexical features, but there are also instances of awkward or incorrect word choices. More precise and natural use of vocabulary would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of structures, the control is not consistent. Punctuation and grammar errors are noticeable throughout the letter, affecting the overall accuracy. More attention to sentence structure and grammatical accuracy is needed to improve the quality of writing.

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