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Band 6+: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course D say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to give you feedback on recent cookery course which I attended.

Recently, I decided to did a short cookery course, and I did a short course. This cookery course was very good and vital.

In this course, I have done for a year, and I have been cooked including cakes and a lot of foods for a year.

One suggestion I have for future courses is to offer a class focused on international street food. I think it would be fascinating to learn about and cook iconic street food dishes from different cultures, which could introduce us to a wide range of flavors and techniques.

Thank you again for the wonderful experience, and I look forward to attending more courses in the future.

Best regards,

Azamat

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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course: 5

cookery: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and specific examples would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences are awkwardly phrased, affecting the overall flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would demonstrate a higher level of lexical resource.

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