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Band 4+: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course D say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I recently took a short cookery course in your company. I was called by cookery course. I was invited by director of food course. It made me happy. To commence with, cookery course is the crucial part of our life. Firstly, I want to introduce myself. My name is Halil. My surname is Akdogan. I’m 27 years old. I’m a chef and I have been working in a big hotel for 3 years. Secondly, I was called by cookery course. I was invited by course director. It made me happy. Because, they wanted to my feedback about this course. However, In my opinion, I enjoyed during cooking course. Therefore, On the other hand, cookery course are my dream job and course. That’s why I enjoyed during this course. I learnt many thing about my work since the course. Because this course suitable my profetion. That’s why, It is a piece of cake for me. You can rely on me. To conclude, I want to give you some advice. For example; after this course, you will start to new course. Because, people love cookery course and cookery course very commen in our country. I hope you will appreciate my advice. I look forward to hearing back from your soon.

Your Sincerely,

Halil Akdogan.

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Overall Band Score

4

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 17

cookery: 7

because: 3

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Task Response

4.5

The letter partially addresses the task by describing what the writer enjoyed about the course and suggesting another cookery course. However, there are significant lapses in content, such as irrelevant personal details and repetition. The response lacks clarity and coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The message is difficult to follow due to the lack of coherence and cohesion. There are frequent lapses in paragraphing, and the ideas are not logically organized. Additionally, there is a lack of cohesive devices to connect the ideas.

Lexical Resource

3.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is often inaccurate and lacks precision. The language used is not natural or sophisticated, and there are errors in word choice and expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of structures, there are frequent grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation is also inconsistent, and there are issues with sentence structure and tense usage.

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