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Band 5+: You recently moved into a new apartment but there are some problems with it. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Describe the problems. Say how they are affecting you. Suggest what you would like the landlord to do.

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Dear Mr.Singh,

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding this situation that I am facing since I have moved to my new apartment.

The problem i am going through is noisy neighbours. There are a lot of time at midnight, I heard shouting and fighting noise from upstairs. Moreover, their children knocking on floor while playing, which is quite frustrating sometimes.

As i am a student, and I have to focus on my studies and assignments. Also, getting better sleep at night to wake up early for university is important.

But due to interruption of voices and many things, my schedule is not properly and regularly maintain. Additionally, I can not even concentrate on reading as well as while sleeping.

To solve this issue, I would like you to suggest me a convenient and peaceful place in a same building. Furthermore, you should encounter with that family members about this complain and aware them. So, this should not happen and others who are living surrounding not face the similar stress as I did.

I look forward to your response I will be there in time

Yours faithfully

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the problems with noisy neighbors, explaining how these issues affect the writer's studies and sleep, and suggesting solutions to the landlord. The content is relevant and generally well-organized. To improve, the letter could benefit from more specific details about the impact of the noise and a clearer articulation of the desired actions from the landlord. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task (describing the problems, their effect, and your suggested solutions). Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'therefore,' 'in addition,' 'however') would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the problems and their impact. For example, instead of 'noisy neighbours,' you could use 'disruptive neighbors' or 'excessive noise levels.' Instead of 'many things,' try to be more specific.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage (a/an/the). For example, 'There are a lot of time at midnight, I heard shouting' should be revised. Also, review sentence structure to ensure sentences are clear and grammatically correct. For example, 'But due to interruption of voices and many things, my schedule is not properly and regularly maintain' needs restructuring.

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