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Band 5+: "You recently moved to a new city and want to join a local sports club. Write a letter to the club manager. In your letter: introduce yourself and explain why you are interested in the club give details about your previous experience in this sport ask about membership details and fees"

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to join a famous brampton cricket and basketball sports club in Brampton, Ontario.

I recently move to this beautiful city called Brampton. Myself, Prayashkumar Pancholi, I am 22 years old. I wanted to join this club as many of mine friends are already in this club and and I had shown lots of videos and good reviews regarding this club.

I have a great background in cricket as I was a captain of Under-19 Baroda Cricket team back in 2019. I am wicketkeeper batsman playing at number four or five whatever suits for the team benefits. I have played 113 matches so far at an average of 58.99 and grabed 37 catches alongwith 17 stumping in my short career till date.

I am deeply interested in joining your club which is located at 777 markbrook lane, Brampton. I would like to have an information regarding the membership of your club and the fees structure.

I would be grateful if you could consider my request for joining your club.

Please fell free to contact me if you need any more information from my end.

Yours faithfully,

Prayash Pancholi

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

brampton: 4

cricket: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail on why the club specifically appeals to the writer would strengthen this section.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6

The writer uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic. More precise and sophisticated word choices would elevate the lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the letter conveys the main points, there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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