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Band 4+: You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

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I am writing to apply for the position of manager that I have recently seen on the TV while I was travelling with my camaraderie friends around Bukhara.

More clearly, there can be found a few facts about me. To begin with, I really excel at controlling staff and giving them tasks accurately. In fact, I have been working as a manager in the King Burger company for 2 years, which I have learned a majority of crucial skills from that workplace, and I can totally believe that I have gained hands-on experience in this field. Moreover, I have completed following courses such as Money Managment at Harvard, Saving money at Webster. Last but not at least, it is true I am not a huge fan of earning that much money due to the fact that my passion is honing my current knowledge base and experience.

I will be happy if you respond to me in the coming months. I enclose my CV and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours sincerely,

Aziz Maxmudov

Word Count: 182

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

money: 3

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Task Response

The letter does not fully address the task as you mentioned applying for the position of a manager instead of a part-time job at the restaurant. Make sure to focus on the specific job mentioned in the task next time.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly and use appropriate paragraph breaks to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. Work on using more precise and relevant vocabulary to enhance your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While there is a variety of sentence structures used, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and article usage for improvement.

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