Band 7: You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter -say what the participants liked about the hotel -explain why they were unhappy about the food -suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to provide you with the feedback for the hospitality that your hotel provided our staff during an all day meeting organized by our company yesterday.

Each member of our team was highly satisfied with the service and the ambience provided by your hotel. Every participant enjoyed his stay, and recommended your hotel for the future meetings of our company. However, they also suggested a few improvements that will make their overall experience more amazing for the meetings to attend in future.

Many participants were unhappy about the food that was offered in the lunch. Firstly, they felt that there were very few vegetarian dishes, and a lot of emphasis was laid on non-vegetarian cuisines. Moreover, they said that the food served to them in the lunch was not hot enough.

Considering this feedback from our members, I would like to suggest some recommendations to prevent such issues in future. Firstly, Many of our employees prefer vegetarian meals over non-vegetarian ones, so kindly try to include more veg dishes in our future gatherings. Secondly, I believe that preparing and serving food during the lunch time will not only keep the meals warm, but fresh as well.

I hope our feedback will help your team to introduce new improvements in your food menu, and boasts your business operations.

All the best,

Paramvir Singh.

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