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Band 5+: you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try get a job. you think he/she should get a job

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Dear Joseph,

Hi, how are you? I’m writing this letter to you which my choice is about to go to collage or try to get a job .

First of all, I think the best way is get a job because of your interests why I’m saying this because you don’t interest on sciences at all . Moreover at the moment your statement isn’t suitable to go to college . If you go to college, you must pay contract but I think you cannot pay .

Also, I believe to get a job is good idea for you because you can invest yourself with a nice salary and then you can completely go to college and get extra money for your books, foods, transport fires.

I hope it will be beneficial for you to work in restaurant rather than working in office because you can get daily salary

Best wishes

Julie

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 4

college: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing advice, but the reasoning could be more clearly structured and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear connections between ideas. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impair the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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