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Band 5+: You recently saw an advertisement for a training course that you think would be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager and say: • What the course is • How it will help your work • Why you would like to attend it

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I would like to express my interest in the mutual fund course. Its one of the banking related course as I would like to increase my level of postion. I have looked recently in our website about this mutual fund course and the duration is 6 months in which 1 exam will be taken at the end of the course. Could you please allow me to book this pn behalf of bank and i would like to prepare and attend some online sessions provided by them. This course will be very beneficiary for my future endeavours.Moreover, it will enhance my knowledge in banking sector and lending loans also it will give me raise in my salary package. It would greatly appreciable if you allow me to complete this course and I would love to join lending team in future and learn more.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Deepshikha

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

would: 5

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the description of the course and its benefits could be more detailed and specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors detract from the overall clarity and impact of the letter. Improved accuracy is needed.

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