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Band 5+: You recently signed up for a language course at a local college, but you've found that the course doesn't meet your expectations. Write a letter to the course coordinator explaining the reasons for your dissatisfaction. You should include details about: - What aspects of the course are unsatisfactory - Why you chose the course originally - What you would like the college to do to address your concerns.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the course provided by your centre last week about publice healthcare and request you to take necessary actions.

I got to know about this webinar through my father as he is the village head, who was organising this event. Since I am a pharmacy graduate, he suggested me to take part into it and see if the people are being eduacted well enough for their health betterment. They main motive for which the course was being held through community centre was their way to present. I thought proper practical knowledge will be provided to people regarding the importance of basic healthcare including first-aid, awareness regarding ongoing disease.

Unfortunately, people were only told about theoratical knowledge, no pamplets were given. When the meeting ended i took survey from different people about course, they also stated it was not well explained.

I will really appreciate if you look into this matter and take neccesary actions that before the initation of any event, proper material must be present beforehand so that local people dont suffer and their money do not go in vain.

Looking forward to your response.

Yours sincerely,

Gurmanpreet kaur.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 5

about: 4

regarding: 3

course: 3

their: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the writer's dissatisfaction with the course, detailing expectations, how the course failed to meet them, and suggesting a resolution. There are some minor lapses in providing specific details and clarity in certain areas. To improve, focus on providing more concrete examples to support your points and ensure clarity in your explanations.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with clearer topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more precise and varied word choices. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'necessary actions,' explore synonyms like 'remedial measures' or 'corrective steps.' Also, be careful with spelling ('publice' should be 'public,' 'eduacted' should be 'educated').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the' vs. 'a'). For example, 'people are being eduacted' should be 'people are being educated' or 'people are educated.' Also, review sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and ensure each sentence conveys a clear idea.

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