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Band 5+: You recently started learning a new skill and want to share your experience with a close friend. Write a letter to your friend telling them about your new learning journey. You should include details about: - what skill you are learning and why you chose it - the challenges you have faced and how you're overcoming them - any fun experiences you've had while learning and what your future goals are.

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Hello my friend.

How are you?

I want to tell you about how I learned English language. I choose it because I want to speak like Americans. And also it helps me to work harder. I want to get IELTS band 9. I know it is very difficult, but I know that I will do it. I was going to many centers, some of them was kicked me out of the center because I was doing poorly in my studies. One day when I came at Innovative centre, I try to studied well. I studied there approximately one year. My teacher was Timur. He has very large experience which give him motivations for work harder. He teached me very good and strictly. Because of him I can learn this skill better. And now I can realize my dreams. I will work to travel agent. When I was a child a really want to be travel agent and now my dreams come to reality.

Lovely your friend

Bye!

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail on the chosen skill, challenges, and future goals. However, the response could benefit from a more structured and detailed account of the learning journey.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and abrupt transitions between ideas. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but the range is limited, and more precise and varied word choices would improve the overall quality. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures are needed to achieve a higher score.

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