Band 5+: You recently stayed at a friend's house while they were away on vacation. Unfortunately, there was a minor accident where you accidentally broke a vase. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should include: - An apology for breaking the vase - An explanation of how the accident happened - What you intend to do to compensate for the damage.

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including an apology, an explanation of the accident, and an offer to compensate for the damage. However, the explanation could be a bit more detailed, and the offer of compensation could be more specific. To improve, consider elaborating on the circumstances of the accident and providing more concrete details about how you plan to replace the vase. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter is generally coherent and the message is easy to follow. However, the organization could be improved by using more formal paragraphing to separate the apology, explanation, and compensation sections more clearly. Transition words could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it could be enhanced by using more varied and descriptive language. For example, instead of just saying 'the small one,' you could describe the vase in more detail. Using synonyms for common words like 'broke' and 'hit' would also improve the lexical resource. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few areas where improvements could be made. Pay attention to sentence structure and word choice to ensure clarity and precision. For example, rephrasing 'I wanted to tell you that everything is alright at your place, but only one thing happened' could make the sentence flow better.