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Band 7+: You recently took a language course at a local college. You are writing to your instructor to apologize for your poor attendance. Write a letter to your instructor. In your letter, include details about: - why your attendance was poor - what you learned from the course - how you plan to improve your language skills in the future.

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Dear Ms. Ariani,

I hope you are doing well. I want to apologize for my poor attendance in class lately. I have been facing some personal issues that have made it difficult for me to attend regularly. Nevertheless, I really enjoy this course and I have learned a lot about the fundamentals of the language, including new vocabulary and grammar. This has greatly helped me understand this language better. Moving forward, I plan to be more disciplined in attending classes and also study more at home. I will use language learning apps and practice with friends to enhance my skills.

Thank you for your understanding. I hope to return soon and participate in class more effectively.

Best regards, Oca

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for poor attendance, what was learned, and future plans for improvement. There are no significant omissions. To improve, you could provide more specific details to strengthen the response. For example, you could elaborate on the 'personal issues' or provide specific examples of vocabulary and grammar learned. Also, you could mention specific language learning apps. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the transitions between ideas are smooth, contributing to a very coherent message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and effectively conveys the intended meaning. The language is natural and demonstrates a strong command of lexical resources.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates excellent grammatical control. The sentences are well-constructed, and there are virtually no errors in grammar or punctuation.

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