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Band 7+: You recently visited a local community center and noticed some problems with its facilities. Write a letter to the manager of the center. In your letter:

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Dear Mr. John,

I hope you are doing well.

I am writing this letter to highlight the problems, I have been facing in the local community center.

I took membership for gym, yoga, library and swimming center. However, I am unhappy with gym and swimming pool services.

Since I started, I have to wait for 30 minutes to use any equipment’s in the gym and this is affecting my daily work schedule. I am missing my urgent meetings at work. Also, the water in the swimming pool is not being changed regularly, because I noticed dust particles in the water as they are acting on my health.

To improve the services, I would like to make some recommendations such as installing more equipment’s in the gym to avoid the long waiting. Additionally, to eradicate the chance of cross contamination in the swimming pool, the water must be changed everyday and pools should be sanitized.

I hope you will look into this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Pawan

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

swimming: 4

water: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, clearly explaining the facilities the writer is unhappy with, describing the problems faced, and suggesting improvements. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further improve, consider adding more specific details to strengthen the points made. For example, instead of just saying 'dust particles,' you could mention the specific health issues they are causing. Also, while the tone is generally appropriate, varying sentence structure could enhance the overall flow and readability.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. The purpose of the letter is immediately apparent, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, consider using more varied cohesive devices to further enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could add transition words or phrases to signal the relationship between ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the intended meaning effectively. While the range is adequate, incorporating more specific or nuanced vocabulary could elevate the letter. For instance, instead of 'affecting my daily work schedule,' you could use 'disrupting my daily work schedule.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition of words like 'services' and 'equipment's'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'equipment's' should be 'equipment,' and 'the water must be changed everyday' should be 'the water must be changed every day.' Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and proper punctuation. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help minimize these errors.

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