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Band 6+: You recently visited a theatre and had an accident there. The staff were very helpful. Write a letter to the manager giving good feedback. In your letter, you should tell: - and describe the accident - how the staff helped you - how similar situations could be prevented in the future.

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Dear Mr. Smith,

On 12th December, I attended a play at your theatre and I had a small incident there. I am writing this letter to thank you for all the support that I received.

During the play, I was going for a washroom break and close to the stage I fell down and sprained my ankle. The electric cables in that area were spread all over and because of dark, I could not see them and thus got entangled and the accident happened.

However, the nearby staff noticed me and immediately came to my rescue. They helped me to get up, took me to the emergency room, gave me first aid and made sure that I was okay as the ambulance arrived. I was really impressed and happy by the assistance and care I received. I would like you to thank everyone on my behalf.

Although I was fortunate to escape a major injury, I would recomend to have better lighting on the floor and tidy management of instruments such and cords and cables to prevent such incidents in future.

Kind Regards

Paul

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing a clear description of the accident, detailing the staff's assistance, and suggesting preventative measures. There might be a few minor areas for improvement, such as elaborating slightly more on the impact of the staff's help or providing more specific suggestions for preventing future accidents, but overall, the response is strong and effectively addresses the prompt.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The sequence of events is clear, and the purpose of the letter is immediately apparent. However, there are a few areas where the flow could be improved. For instance, elaborating slightly more on the impact of the staff's help could strengthen the letter. Also, ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to maintain a consistent flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and effectively conveys the message. Phrases like 'attended a play,' 'washroom break,' 'sprained my ankle,' and 'emergency room' are well-suited to the context. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to safety measures and expressing gratitude. For example, instead of 'better lighting,' you could suggest 'enhanced illumination' or 'improved visibility.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with mostly accurate sentence structures and punctuation. However, there are a few areas where improvements can be made. For example, in the sentence 'Although I was fortunate to escape a major injury, I would recomend to have better lighting,' the word 'recomend' should be 'recommend.' Additionally, ensure consistent use of articles (a, an, the) and correct tense usage throughout the letter. Reviewing and correcting these minor errors will enhance the overall grammatical accuracy.

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