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Band 4+: You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter • tell your friend about the holiday • explain how the guidebook was helpful • say when and how you will return the guidebook

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Dear Devang!

I hope you’re doing well. I just back from my trip and it’s unforgettable trip, must say.

I went on a 3 day mountain tracking in Manali, Uttarakhand, India. I reached their by train and after relaxing one day we started our tracking. It took us one and half day to reached at the top so we spend night in tents.

You’re guidebook helped me a lot in this trip because you wrote many important information related to mountain tracking. Especially, how we have to breath when air is become thinner at high altitude.

I’ll send your guidebook by post and you’ll receive it within a week.

Thank you for your help and we’ll meet soon!

Best regards,

Karan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

tracking: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and descriptive language would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some improvements in sentence structure and flow would enhance readability and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is sufficient but could be expanded to include more precise and descriptive language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter conveys its message, numerous grammatical errors detract from the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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