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Band 6+: You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend about the holiday explain how the guidebook was helpful say when and how you will return the guidebook

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Dear Sumit, Hope you are doing splendidly! Old charm. I recently went to a trip to Bali on Oct 20, 2025. I am writing this letter in connection with you how your guidebook was a game changer for me. Bali is an amazing place as well as it shows an astonishing views of mountains lakes and beaches.

I am very thankful for you for lending me this knowledgeable guidebook which turns out to be very supportive and useful for me throughout this journey. There are all the information is inbuilt, which is valuable and useable for me to relocate the location .Moreover this tour guide serves as a life saviour for me because when I was hiking on the mountain I found my phone missing in my pocket, I was shocked because I was alone there and with the help of this book. I found my hotel without my phone.

I will return your book through Canada post and you will probably receive this within 1 week.

Your sincerely

Reshav

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B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing details about the holiday, the guidebook's usefulness, and the return method. The narrative is engaging and the language is generally accurate. To improve, consider varying sentence structure and using more sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the overall impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with clear topic sentences for each paragraph to enhance coherence. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For example, instead of 'amazing place,' you could describe Bali with more specific adjectives. Try to incorporate synonyms and less common vocabulary to elevate your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect the clarity of your writing. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize errors.

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