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Band 5+: You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Melisa,

I am writing to you about the concert with your participation, that I attended recently.

To be honest, I have never been interested in pop music. However, after I had heard your new songs, I fall in love in all of your songs. Listening to the like music of your album was wonderful, and I greatly enjoyed your voice.

A month ago, I graduated from the National Conservatoire of music, and now, I am an aspiring producer of the unknown but very talented group which is called ‘Sun’. I possess abundance of contacts in the musical sphere, and I would like to offer an exciting suggestion.

I have thought that, it would be perfect for both of us if we worked together. As you are young singer, I can help you with your career, and you would help me with mine at the same time.

I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for positive emotions that I gained during the concert.

Kind regards,

Tom Usher.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

music: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by expressing admiration for the singer's performance, providing details of the writer's musical activities, and suggesting collaboration. However, the response could be improved by providing more specific details about the singer's performance and how exactly the writer would like the singer to help with their musical activities.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor issues with sentence structure and word choice that could be improved for better clarity and flow. Additionally, the use of transitions could enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used in the letter, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. To improve, aim for more precise and natural word choices. Additionally, expanding the vocabulary related to music and collaboration would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors present, such as verb tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. Proofreading for grammar and sentence structure would help improve accuracy.

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