Multiple Graphs

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image contains two pie charts for energy production in France for 1995 and 2005. In 1995: Gas 29.63%, Coal 29.80%, Petrol 29.27%, Nuclear 6.40%, Other 4.90%. In 2005: Gas 30.31%, Coal 30.93%, Petrol 19.55%, Nuclear 10.10%, Other 9.10%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

This illustration demonstrates changes of energy production in 1995 and 2005. Overall, each of these pie charts recorded the same high figures of coal and gas extraction. Nevertheless, the production of nuclear and other kinds almost doubled. In contrast, the petrol sector’s percentage significantly fell. This essay will compare data and find out any fluctuations.

In 1995, coal outnumbered other sources and reached 29,8 percent. Gas and petrol likewise occupied the most of the chart and totaled roughly 30 percent. Whereas neither nuclear nor other kinds exceeded even 10 percent threshold.

In 2005, coal and gas didn’t experience any considerable variations. Instead, the smallest sections in prior given year rapidly surged to 10,1 and 9,1 percent. In spite of all these positive shiftings, petrol is considered to be the only energy, which went through some negative changes. Ranging from 1995 its’ proportion abruptly declined by 10 percent.

Word Count: 147

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percent: 5

other: 3

petrol: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively identifies the main trends and makes relevant comparisons between the two years. The overview is clear, highlighting the stability of coal and gas versus the growth in nuclear/other sources and the decline in petrol. To improve, avoid using 'essay' when referring to a report, as this is a data description task. Additionally, ensure that the mathematical descriptions are precise; for example, stating that petrol declined 'by 10 percent' can be ambiguous (it could mean a 10% reduction of its original value or a 10 percentage point drop). Using 'percentage points' would provide better clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the coherence is hindered by several issues. The final sentence of the first paragraph ('This essay will compare data and find out any fluctuations') is inappropriate for a Task 1 report; you should not state your intentions or use 'essay' in a report. Additionally, some cohesive devices are used incorrectly or feel forced, and the transition between ideas could be smoother to ensure the reader can follow the comparison effortlessly.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary (e.g., 'outnumbered', 'surged', 'abruptly declined'), but there are several instances of imprecise or incorrect word choices. For example, 'positive shiftings' is not a natural collocation in this context, and 'extraction' is used when the task refers to 'production'. Using 'energy' as a singular noun to refer to a sector ('the only energy') is also imprecise. Aim for more academic and precise terminology related to data trends.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. There are issues with punctuation (e.g., using commas instead of decimals in numbers like '29,8'), possessive forms ('its' vs 'it's'), and sentence fragments (e.g., the sentence starting with 'Whereas'). Ensure that complex sentences are fully formed and that punctuation follows standard English conventions for numerical data.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

the number of tourist visiting japan in three nations their types of travel

The given charts illustrate the number of tourists in 3 distinct countries UK, US and Japan who traveled to Australia between 1995 and 2005 and their choices of accommodation during their visit from 1995 to 2005. Overall, it is apparent that while the number of tourists from the UK and US to Australia rose exponentially […]

Band 7+

the charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accomodation in three different years

The bar graphs illustrate the percentage of four various kinds of accommodation, namely staying with family, rented apartments, camping, and hotels that was used by holidaymakers in a 20-year period from 1988 to 2008. Overall, the proportion of both hotels and rented apartments witnessed an increase, while the opposite trend was observed in staying with […]

Band 5+

The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose a particular university in the UK in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided pie charts delineates information regarding why students chose a particular teritary institutions in the United Kingdom across a period of 2010 and 2020. Overall, it is distinctly clear that academic reputation and course availabilty accounted for the highest share throughout the period, whereas least proportion was recorded in tution fees. Additionally, a minor […]

Band 5+

The chart gives information about the proportion os students choosing different science subjects in a university in 1992 and 2012

The bar chart compares the proportion of university students choosing various science subjects in 1992 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that the figure for males experienced a decline across the period, whereas females showed an upward trend. Regarding the science subjects, biology was the most preferred choice, despite seeing a significant decrease by 2012, […]

Band 9

The bar chart describes different types of films which were shot in the UK and Australia in 2001, with the line graph detailing how many people went to the cinema in those countries from 1976 to 2006.

The given bar chart depicts several type of films that were shown in the UK and Australia in 2001, whereas the other line graph illustrates the total expenditures gathered from movies in the UK and Australia throughout the period from 1976 to 2006 with gap between of 5 years. Overall, in the UK, all type […]

Band 4+

See All

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Other Topics:

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1998 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the number of tourist visiting japan in three nations their types of travel

the charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accomodation in three different years

The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose a particular university in the UK in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about the proportion os students choosing different science subjects in a university in 1992 and 2012

The bar chart describes different types of films which were shot in the UK and Australia in 2001, with the line graph detailing how many people went to the cinema in those countries from 1976 to 2006.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium