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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Vithu,

I hope you doing well.l am very lucky to say advice your needs.It is very difficult to find a good friends but I would say some details. Firstly you do not belif everyone. You talk with your calssmate while sometimes you find good friends.You can join clubs because lot of I people came there so easily get it.

Moreover you will participate in school activities Like sports,cultres, programmes.It help discovre storng bond.Into the process many bad friends came your way but very focus on good thing.I hope You will consider my advice in your difficult situation. You will need more advice immidiyetly infore me i wil assist you.

Warm regards,

Maikkal

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

advice: 3

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Task Response

4.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in suggestions. More specific examples and elaboration would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and poor sentence structure significantly impact the overall coherence and flow. Improved sentence structure and grammar are needed.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is required.

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