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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the number of French adults whose parents spoke a French regional language to them when they were children and the number who speak a French regional language to their own children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.

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The image includes two bar charts. The top chart displays two categories for adults whose parents spoke regional languages during their childhood, with "Spoken habitually" showing Alsatian at 100k, Occitan at 300k, Breton at 150k, Creole at 60k, and Corsican at 20k, while "Spoken occasionally" shows Alsatian at 75k, Occitan at 1025k, Breton at 200k, Creole at 65k, and Corsican at 75k. The bottom chart details adults who speak regional languages to their own children, highlighting Alsatian at 75k, Occitan at 450k, Breton at 75k, Creole at 60k, and Corsican at 20k.

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The charts compare the number of French adult whose parents spoke regional languages to them as children and the number who now speak these languages to their own children.

Overall, Occitan and Alsatian were the most common regional language. However, Alsatian became the most widely spoken language to the next generation. Most language were spoken less often by parent to their children.

As children, about 600 thousand adults heard Occitan regularly and around 1 million heard it occasionally. For Alsatian, the figures were about 400 thousand and 300 thousand. Breton had lower number, while Creole and Corsican were the least common.

When speaking to their own children, around 450 thousand adult used Alsatian, making it the most popular language. Occitan ranked second with about 300 thousand speakers. The figure for Breton, Creole, and Corsican were much lower, at around 100 thousand or less. Overall, regional languages became less common in the younger generation.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

thousand: 6

alsatian: 4

language: 4

number: 3

regional: 3

languages: 3

children: 3

their: 3

occitan: 3

about: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides a clear comparison between the two charts. The overview effectively highlights the general decline in language usage across generations. To improve, ensure more precise data grouping and avoid minor grammatical errors (e.g., 'Most language were' should be 'Most languages were'). While the report captures the essence of the data, more specific comparisons between the 'habitual' and 'occasional' categories in the first chart would strengthen the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is easy to follow. To improve, try to use a wider variety of cohesive devices and transition signals to link sentences more smoothly. For example, instead of starting sentences with the subject directly, you could use phrases like 'In terms of...' or 'Regarding the second chart...' to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task and allows for a clear description of the data. However, there is some repetition of basic words (e.g., 'spoken', 'number', 'language'). To reach a higher band, aim to use more sophisticated synonyms and varied collocations. For instance, instead of 'the figures were', you could use 'the data indicated' or 'the proportions stood at'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement with nouns (e.g., 'most common regional languages' instead of 'language'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that affect the precision of the writing. Common errors include singular/plural noun agreement (e.g., 'French adult' instead of 'adults', 'Most language' instead of 'languages', '450 thousand adult' instead of 'adults') and article usage. Pay close attention to pluralization when referring to groups of people or categories to ensure grammatical accuracy.

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