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Band 5+: you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are interested in applying to a college to study a course. Write a letter to the college administration. In your letter: Explain which course you are interested in Ask for details about the course content and fees Inquire about the application process Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to explain about course that i need based on plan to going abroad. I want to know some details and explanations.

To begin with, i feel impressed by your course programme because as i have not seen any other organisation offering such a valuable opportunity. I need to take IELTS course General Training.I would also to know what participants can expect to gain from this programme such as skills, communication, certification,and networking opportunities.This is can help me to decide how the course would help me to achieve my goals. In addition, i need information about the schedule,teacher, and how long the process could take.

I would be gratefull if you can provide the details regarding cost fees, including the additional costs of material or registration. Furthermore, i would like to enquire about the application process, deadline and how to submit an application.

Thank you for your time and consideration, I look forward to your response

Your faithfully

Ayusali

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

would: 4

about: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The response is clear and mostly fulfills the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's organization is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Some sentences lack clarity and precision.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but more precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact. There is room for improvement in word choice and range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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