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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or college lecturer. Write at least 150 words

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The image contains two graphs; the first graph displays the average number of hours worked per week with writers at 35 hours, doctors at 50 hours, chefs at 45 hours, lecturers at 40 hours, lawyers at 65 hours, movie producers at 75 hours, and business men at 55 hours. The second graph is a pie chart showing the occupations of people suffering from stress-related illness with business men at 11%, writers at 8%, doctors at 15%, chefs at 10%, lecturers at 25%, lawyers at 8%, movie producers at 18%, and programmers at 5%.

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The bar chart compares how many hours worked people from different professions, and the pie chart illustrates the level stress among these professionals.

Overall, it is evident that business men spend more time while working than people from other fields. Despite the fact that lecturers work fewer hours, they tend to have high level of stress.

The professionals that spend more time to work are business men, which showed an average of over 65 hours per week. Movie producers also work nearly 55 hours per week, while the figure for doctors is 50 hours. Other professionals worked less than 50 hours, lecturers being the fewer number of hours working with under 25b hours.

Looking at the pie chart, the fourth of total number of people suffered from stress are lecturers, followed by movie producers (18%) and doctors (15%). Interestingly though, business men, who spend more time to work, are less stressed, accounting for only 11%. The shares of other professionals, such as writers, lawyers, and programmers are fewer than 10%.

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business: 3

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lecturers: 3

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professionals: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the information presented in both graphs. It provides a general overview and highlights key trends and specific data points. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report states that business men work over 65 hours, while the graph indicates 55 hours. Also, the report mentions lecturers working under 25 hours, but the graph shows 40 hours. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and include all professions mentioned in the visual description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for each graph. However, there are some issues with the flow of ideas and transitions between sentences. For example, in the second paragraph, the connection between the first and second sentences could be clearer. In the third paragraph, the transition to discussing specific professions could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the task, such as 'professions,' 'stress levels,' 'average,' and 'accounting for.' However, there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'people from different professions,' you could use synonyms or more specific terms. Also, consider using more sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'how many hours worked people' should be 'how many hours people worked,' and 'high level of stress' should be 'a high level of stress'. Also, 'business men spend more time while working than people from other fields' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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